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Archive for June, 2008
The Mug Says It All
This site shows just how a life of crime can wreak havoc on a good-looking woman. Check it out. Think about how different the woman looks in the first mug shot and the last. Consider how a life of crime would impact your character. Would it show in the wrinkles on their face, and in their dead eyes? Is their conscience so dead that it has no impact at all?
For each of your characters, think about their physical attributes the more time their are processed by the cops. Use this knowledge for your story – even if they are not criminals. You might be surprised where it takes you.
Commonly Misspelled Words
absence
abundance
accessible
accidentally
acclaim
accommodate
accomplish
accumulate
achievement
acquaintance
across
aggravate
alleged
apparent
appearance
atheist
auxiliary
barbiturate
beggar
beginning
believe
biscuit
bouillon
boundary
camouflage
cemetery
chagrined
challenge
chief
collectible
colonel
colossal
commitment
comparative
competent
conceive
condescend
conscientious
consciousness
convenient
deceive
defendant
deferred
descend
desperate
dilemma
disappearance
disastrous
discipline
dissatisfied
ecstasy
efficiency
either
eligible
equipped
equivalent
exaggerate
exceed
existence
exuberance
fallacious
familiar
fascinate
feasible
fictitious
fluorescent
foreign
forfeit
foresee
fulfill
fundamentally
gauge
generally
grievous
guarantee
guerrilla
handkerchief
harass
heinous
hemorrhage
hoarse
hypocrite
idiosyncrasy
ignorance
immediately
implement
incidentally
indicted
indispensable
influential
inoculate
intercede
interference
interrupt
irrelevant
jealousy
judicial
knowledge
laboratory
legitimate
leisure
lenient
liaison
lieutenant
lightning
longitude
luxury
maintenance
manageable
maneuver
marriage
millennium
millionaire
miniature
minuscule
mischievous
misspelled
mortgage
mosquito
murmur
narrative
necessary
neighbor
ninth
noticeable
nuisance
obedience
obstacle
occasion
occurred
omission
omit
opinion
opponent
oppression
optimism
ordinarily
outrageous
overrun
parallel
parliament
particularly
pavilion
peaceable
peculiar
perceive
permanent
perseverance
picnicking
piece
pilgrimage
possess
potato (older spellings add an “e”)
preference
preferred
prejudice
prevalent
primitive
privilege
professor
prominent
pronunciation
propaganda
publicly
quandary
quarantine
questionnaire
quizzes
realistically
realize
recede
receipt
receive
recommend
reference
referred
relevant
relieving
remembrance
reminiscence
repetition
reservoir
resistance
rheumatism
roommate
sacrilegious
sacrifice
satellite
scenery
schedule
secede
seize
separate
sergeant
shepherd
similar
simile
skiing
soliloquy
souvenir
spontaneous
strenuous
stubbornness
subordinate
succeed
sufficient
supersede
suppress
susceptible
symmetrical
synonymous
technique
temperature
tendency
theories
therefore
thorough
tomorrow
tournament
tourniquet
transferred
twelfth
tyranny
unanimous
unnecessary
usage
usually
vacuum
valuable
vengeance
vigilant
village
villain
visible
warrant
weird
wherever
wholly
yacht
yield
zoology
The most comprehensive list of misspelled words is available from Paul Brians, author of Common Errors in English Usage. at http://www.wsu.edu/~brians/errors/index.html. His site was a Writer’s Digest Top 101 in 2006.
Need it quick? Check the back pages of your calendar. They typically offer up a page of commonly misspelled words related to business.
Former Detective Nominated for Award

Lee Lofland, a former detective and author of Police Procedure and Investigation, A Guide for Writers, was nominated for the Macavity Award for Best Nonfiction mystery.
Find out more about Lee, a WW contributor, at www.leelofland.com. He also manages The Graveyard Shift, a blog that features different experts in the criminal justice field.
What Are They REALLY Saying?
You are talking to a friend or interviewing for a job. Things seem GREAT. At least, verbally. But does the body language match the words?
A former FBI agent tells his tricks for learning the truth through the body in this Washington Post article.
Free Tunes from Author Stefan Petrucha
YA author Stefan Petrucha knows how to market. In his latest announcement, Petrucha invites fans to his site get free tunes inspired by his Time Tripper novel series, as well as his September single title release, Rule of Won.
Here are the details from the author himself:
Author/Graphic Novelist Stefan Petrucha here, asking
you to check out the new music page at www.petrucha.com for
access to three FREE tunes inspired by my books; the TimeTripper series and
my upcoming novel from Walker, The
Rule of Won. These are intended to promote the novels, so copy ‘em and
pass ‘em along as much as you like.
In the days
to come they’ll also be available at popular download sites such as iTunes
and AmazonMP3, so instead of simply getting them for free, folks will
have the chance to pay for them and help support the starving creators.
Ain’t democracy grand?
Does using
music to promote a book work? The heavy metal rocker Wake
up to Reality (TimeTripper) by Jazan Wild has already been downloaded
over 30k times, and the series has been enjoying some new attention at
sites like Goodreads and sundry blogs, so I can’t help but think the song has a
little something to do with getting the word out.
I first met
Jazan when he asked me to script his Carnival of Souls comic
series. The ideas and the artwork by Kevin Conrad were so terrific I couldn’t
refuse. Turnabout is fair play, so I asked Jazan to come up with a song for
TimeTripper, and this was the fantastic
result.
Once
Upon A-Time was a more laid back song I originally wrote for TimeTripper,
but never had a) a chorus or b) the means to record it, until recently.
Aforementioned chorus, lead vocal and amazing guitar work were provided by my
talented brother-in-law Rob Sunderland. Sarah Kinney joins me on the backup
vocals. I wanted something that would recall the sixties and the work of the
Grateful dead. While I’d never say we got anywhere near to matching Gerry Garcia
& Co, I hope there’s a ripple of them in there somewhere. For Jazan, the piece reminded him more
of Jim Croce, so what can I say?
I’ll be
promoting The
Rule of Won more heavily when we get closer to its September 2 release
date, but the song is up now. It’s a bit of tongue-in-cheek alt rock fun with
yours truly on lead vocals, piano and guitar, with Rob on bass, lead guitar and
backup vocals.
So, that’s
the current collection! I’ve had a deeply amateurish relationship to music since
high school, so, really, this is mostly an excuse for me to play around – and if
some folks get a kick out of listening, so much the better. Would love to hear
what everyone thinks, so please feel free to use the Contact button on my web page.
Pax.
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The Lure & The Teaser by Robert W. Walker
Writing a Winning Synopsis to Catch an Editor’s Eye
Hard won lessons in the trade
Synopsis. What the devil is it? Some call it your platform these days, others refer to it as the pitch or the logline. I submit that it is what you want to see on the back of your novel or on the flap in hardcover—the COPY.
Let’s take a hard look at what I had proposed as my Flap-Jacket Copy for my next novel, DEAD ON due out in 2009. Read it and note the dissection after each paragraph.
Atlanta PI Marcus Rydell is out to reclaim his hold on life. Dr. Kat Holley seeks a fiery revenge on a maniac who has destroyed both their lives. Together, hero and heroine, hunters, come to respect and understand one another, and to share a bond that colors this suspenseful thriller filled as it is with bright touches of romance, light banter, and laugh-out-loud humor alongside terror. And as in any good noir mystery-thriller, there figures a black dog; this one’s named Paco.
At once, in sentence one, I name the two principal characters and set the location, and in same sentence I touch on the major thrust of the book—that it is a revenge tale. Not to mention that both characters are flawed—their lives destroyed. Sentence two, I tell you they are hunters who come to respect, understand, and care about each other on this journey of vengeance. Finally, you learn that there is humor and romance interspersed with the serious mayhem, along with a dog named Paco. Now let’s have at paragraph two written to entice an editor to read the book and love it!
Just when disgraced Atlanta cop-turned-PI Marcus Rydell prepares to eat his gun, a kid in trouble, a call to duty, and a dirty blonde named Kat Holley stop him cold. Kat Holley pulls Marcus from a suicidal depression, and his soon-to-be demolished apartment building—only to make him face a past he cannot come to terms with on his own. But not before she leads him on a deadly hunt deep into the blackest forests of the Red Earth State. Near the Georgia-Tennessee border in the breathtaking Blue Ridge Lake countryside, the pair witness a safe paradise become their death trap, as their prey is no ordinary man. They seek to destroy a local legend, a cave-dwelling ex-marine who happens to be a multiple murderer. In fact, their prey is a monster whose instincts and military training have allowed him to survive in the wilderness for four years, eluding the Feds as well as the Atlanta PD.
You are wooing an editor, so a little judicious repeating of the facts and going into more detail here is a good thing. The setting is brought more into focus along with the fact that it does not remain static and nor do the characters. Here to the villain is introduced and given some shape. Let’s see what paragraph three of the synopsis as sales tool brings us:
However, the hunt for the evil torturer and executioner, Iden Cantu, pivots. And now Cantu comes for them, leaving the dead in his wake. In the end, they must duel with this psychotic deviant, who is equipped with night-vision, a high-powered Bushman, and a cruel intent to kill by means of mental and physical pain.
In this final paragraph, the conflict is ratcheted up as our heroes have the tables turned on them in this high stakes game of cat and mouse, and while that may seem a cliché, you want to find a clever and fresh way to say it’s so. This paragraph also brings the killer even more in focus as he represents the threat that Marcus and Kat have to confront. Both the good guys and the bad have to measure up and be large enough and interesting enough to make the conflict of interest.
In all of the synopsis I’ve answered the five questions required of all journalistic writing and sales pitches –Who is it about, What is it about, Where is it about, When is it about, and Why is it of interest? And How is it accomplished? Easy and Simply: PI Marcus and Dr. Kat versus the evil, psychotic marine serial killer Iden in the North Georgia woods in a modern day tale of vengeance and courage strained to the limit—a dark duel that keeps Marcus from spiraling into depression. He learns that hunting humans is cathartic! Kat reminds him of this lost passion. And along the way, they discover one another. The Who, What, Where, Why, and How of it are your synopsis and platform all rolled into one as they are all present in your sales pitch.
Writing the synopsis is writing the most important short story you will ever write. It is best to read twenty or a hundred back flap or back copy descriptions of other books in any and all genres to acquire a knack for doing it yourself, but you, my friend, YOU know your book better than anyone. It is just a matter of taking off your crafty, creative writer’s hat and donning your even craftier salesman’s hat and rely on the old journalistic principles of telling a story within a paragraph or two. Just make sure every ‘i’ is dotted and every ‘t’ is crossed for you are first judged not on your novel but on your synopsis and cover letter.
Happy Writing and Selling Your Work!
Robert W. Walker
www.RobertWWalkerbooks.com
www.myspace.com/robertwwalkerbooks
PASIC Searching for Authors
The Published Authors’ Special Interest Chapter of Romance Writers of America offers up a fun, personable blog where authors can chat with readers. Check it out and let them know if you’d like to participate.
http://toberead.wordpress.com/